ok actually this whole story was really good and lisa is the love of my life amen

i loved this until jack and ianto started being transphobic lmao

Would love you to come back and add to this story.

Have come back for another read of this, it is just as enjoyable second time around, and I am sure I will read it again in the future. Puts a smile on my face. Love these ones that take them out of Torchwood/aliens/immortality.

Lovely story, even if it's not finished. I just wish we'd got the I love you's. Thanks for sharing and for doing such a great job. )

hi! i rly like this story and i just wish you'll continue it soon! thx :)

This s brilliant, please continue :) or is this finished?

Talking about moving on, I would like to move on to the next chapter. Where is it?
:D

Oh my!

I did not see that coming; but to be fair Ianto lied by omission rather than flagrantly lying to Jack's face. When he calms down surely Jack willsee this and recognise the difference.

Here's hoping.
Great chapter.

Both Ianto and Jack have found their new family setting, if they did but know it.

Babbling away in Welsh, I loved this idea.

"Jack felt at ease, he could do this. He could take on the challenge of learning a new body."
I like that.

Huh uh, I smell trouble. :(

Oh my decisive Ianto - I like.

Awkward. Although as an investigator, I'm sure Jack will be able to work out the inner dynamics of Ianto and Lisa.

I feel as though I'm following the breadcrumbs, that lead to the gingerbread house. I'm more than happy to follow.