Danny you have a girlfriend who can grant just about any wish, I get you don't want to abuse Desiree's abilities. I'm sure if you explain this shit to her she'd be more than willing to help you out. You're only limited by your own imagination, and I'm talking about Vlad and his bigoted laws and Paulina.

Bravo bravo ! Because of reading this made me like danny x desiree thanks for this wonderful story !

This was so sweet and got me right in the FEELS! And I LOVE that you used the vows from "Corpse Bride"!
This only thing that could make this better would be a 'lemon' of their wedding night! ;)

SAAAAMMMMM! U BITCH

This was actually really good. Could use a little fine-tuning, but great, nonetheless. We need more Danny/Desiree stories.

Good

Damn I'm done I hate when the hero gets shit on like that

I look to story but the writing itself was pretty bad there wasn't enough detail to show reaction of the characters but I did like the story itself I am a bit of a fan of this couple but I felt that the dialogue was to straightforward in the story.

And you ruined yet another fic with utterly implausible, complete bullshit while *trying* for 'drama' and angst.

Ok first, the GIW are horribly incompetent, but you asspull a seemingly super duper overly competent super squad just to fit the scene so you can have *drama*. Sorry but bullshit.

Second you had a ghost possess Val, IN HER SUIT. The suit you JUST got done showing as being proof against... GHOST POWERS! Surely possession is a ghost power, so really, how the hell could Technus possess her? Answer is, he couldn't.

Third, you actually had Danny, who was fully human at the time, fall 10,000 feet into water and LIVE? Seriously? Sorry but no, he'd be pulped hitting even water at that distance of fall.

You have some great ideas for your fics. But damn it if you don't always manage to put me the hell off in your longer fics by going to stupid levels to ramp up the angst, drama, etc.

For fucks sake, a Mayor doesn't even have the level of power you've had Vlad wield, nor could a US govt agency just freely send a big ass squad loaded with hi-tech weapons into Italy so freely. Italy is NOT some third world shit hole.

Not to mention your biggest fuck up plotwise, how the FUCK seemingly EVERYONE in Amity was able to find Danny and Desiree, despite the wish you had him make explicitly NOT allowing that. I don't give a FUCK about HOW they were tracked, his wish blocked being tracked, yet half the fucking town showed up, because you needed more... drama and angst.

Uh they were in Desiree's realm. So how and why would Vlad just happen to be there to watch the conversation? Sorry but that's far too much coincidence to be believable.

Ugh, I don't much care that Sam has 'feelings' for Danny, because in this fic, they're not healthy feelings. I keep expecting Sam to boil Danny's pet rabbit (if he had a pet rabbit anyway) and declare that she 'will NOT be ignored!', because Same in here is giving off serious 'Fatal Attraction' vibes.

Amazed Danny isn't tired of it. I know I'd be fed up with a female friend, no matter our feelings for each other, who seems to think I'm not allowed any other females in my life unless they're blood related.

Hell, I wouldn't even be interested romantically in a female who was that jealous outside a relationship. Think how she'd be if you dated her! She'd be demanding you not hold a job where any of your co-workers are female before long.

Excellent! Just plain EXCELLENT! :-)

Anybody else notice that technically danny went to hell? That's kinda fucked up

Best one I have read so for!

I had a feeling that the time wizard would officiate the wedding. I'm sad that Danny's human half perished, but everything turned out for the best! Lovely story. It actually reminds me of one where Danny ends up with Kitty. Same outcome.