Lovely!

so beautiful. it made me cry

Aww, very emotive, I could see poor Jack on the floor crying, almost like Ianto's ghost was there trying to comfort him.

:)

Oh wow... this is just... this is the kind of writing that actually makes you feel it. My chest hurts. This is... amazing.

I'm actually in tears after reading this.

Absolutely beautiful and completely heartbreaking.

Really well done.

Beautifully written. So sad :(