I... you make it seem that domestic abuse is okay cause they love each other.. this story just gave me anxiety

I liked this story, but it felt like you were leading up to revealing Charlie as Bella's father but then you never did.

I hate Edward in this He is too controlling

DURE ET DIFFICILE HISTOIRE... ambiguité de la maltraitance et de ce qu'elle fait ressentir à ceux qui la subissent... vraiment, il fallait oser et vous l'avez fait! chapeau;

Petit bémol pour la fin... je reste sur ma faim...

You're story had a good plot, or I wouldn't have read it but I do not like this Edward!
He says he hates it when James hits Bella then hits AND chokes her and acts like it's okay when she says it was nothing. Nobody has any right to do any of that and he didn't even change by the end of the book. That's just 'how they work'. In real life if he was caught he would be sent to prison for abuse! You can't just smack and choke people just because they talk to somebody else. When Bella got mad at Edward and Lauren at lunch, Edward got pissed at her for "being rude" but when Bella talks to a guy who's not even straight Edward tried to choke her!? That's sick and wrong on so many levels!

You're a good writer but this story is fucking sick! Nothing makes it okay for Edward to treat Bella like shit and them tells her he loves her!

You're a good writer but this story is fucking sick! Nothing makes it okay for Edward to treat Bella like a piece of shit and then tell her that he loves her!

I like the story but, I will b honest with u I WANT TO TIE WET DEER HIDE 2 JAMES LIMBS BETWEEN TWO TREES & LET THEM DRY IT WOULD B PAINFUL & PULL HIS LIMBS OFF WHEN IT FULLY DRIED !

Wow. I don't know what to say.

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