I prefer not to squint, as I hate Yaoi and I wish people would stop pairing the poor Wammy boys. I love this as a friendship fic.

Absolutely lovely- especially the characterization of Mello.

I loved this.

Beautiful.

A simple yet effective plot- I really felt for Mello. And at first, I thought that Matt was harsh, but he did have a point... I found myself getting emotional at the end. The writing was, as usual, amazing.

Make more one-shots? XD

Aww. I really liked this. At first I thought you made Mattie a big meanie, but then I smiled when Mel yanked off his goggles. XD I also like how you made Mello a little less... angry? than alot of stories do.

Anyway~

Keep up the good writing!

:)

~Pika

Aww poor Matt he's crying...and poor Mello...

This story is love. The writting, gorgeous. The plot, phenomenal. Amazing job!

I want to marry this story, but that would be weird, so I wont... Or will I?

Sorry if I'm freaking you out by the way, not intentional.

well.. i cried too.