Oh my word I cannot figure out why I'm only the third reviewer! You have 17 favorites, though, but add one more. That's me.

Holy cow. This actually makes a lot of sense; I really like your analysis of Naoi. Keep writing! ;)

Well done, and IMO in character for pre-Otonashi Naoi. I especially like how you managed to convey his scorn so well without needing to go into first person. Makes you hate him but at the same time, feel bad for him. Great job. :D