I really liked your story and wonder why it has so few reviews. It would definitely deserve more. Your style is smooth, your characterisation good (I especially liked the way you wrote Toph, even if that was just a short part), and your way of writing emotions is great.

if you do, do the legend of korra make aang live forever and aang korras dad. i know it's stupid but i'm seven get with the program teens

Cliffhanger! I wonder what's going to happen next? Please update soon? :)

Wow, this story is awsome.

Cant wait for the next chapture!

- Pengwens

this story is amazing beautiful and full of scenes that really hurt and lots of romance, keep up the good work. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

great chapter! update soon!

I really enjoy your story. Please keep up the great work!

omg i love this story!

you have to continue it!

update soon ;D

I actually edited this page and added breaks to each chapter, I guess decided not to save it. Sorry about that.

Really really good. Though I agree that you should add some sort of mark to show where a POV change is happening. Otherwise, totally awesome.

Cant wait for more!

Great chapter! Loved it! Hope everything works out for aang and katara. Update asap!

Another great chapter, sweetheart! You're always so amazing when you paint the image of everything going on in each scene so perfectly!

I love the imagery you used when Katara and Aang were talking about the dreams they've both been experiencing. And I'm so happy that Sokka's still with Suki, even though long distance. Very nice chapter hunny!

Woah!

The beginning bit kind of reminded me of right before the eclipse when Aang kissed Katara for the first time and she was just so stunned she didn't do anything.

I can't believe WATER benders are partly responsible for this! I can't wait to see how the battle ends!

Wow, why would Katara say that! Anyway nice chapter!