Reviews for Evening Rain
TheDarkAngel25 chapter 28 . 8/25/2019
Just finished reading this story, it was amazing. Definitely will be reading again in future.
QueenGB chapter 28 . 8/10/2019
I don’t think I would have survived while this was an WIP. Especially based on your a/n that it was tough to finish. Thank you! I couldn’t put it down and loved every single sad, unique, lovely, confusing beautiful moment of it. And so it is...
QueenGB chapter 25 . 8/10/2019
Nice. Now give them peace and we have a winner
QueenGB chapter 24 . 8/10/2019
Yeah it would make sense that subconsciously he was angry at her and didn’t forgive her because she went to James and he lost everything. Everyone had something to release it seems.
QueenGB chapter 23 . 8/10/2019
You have a very firm grasp on something utterly unique and amazing here with this story. Phew...
QueenGB chapter 22 . 8/10/2019
Powerful chapter. So the loss of Victoria is what made him sadistic and willing to torture them through lifetimes. I don’t however think it’s fair or cool that Bella is playing the trust card with Edward when he has only her history and the heartbreak of the loss to go by. She’s not sharing what she knows or being honest. She needs to cut him some freaking slack. Sorry. I still like her strong and determined though. :-)
QueenGB chapter 21 . 8/10/2019
How sad this James/Jake is to not move on. Demented actually. Does he possess a skill or is being a sadist his only gift?
QueenGB chapter 19 . 8/10/2019
So are they angels? Seraphs? It’s great about the baby. More and more patterns are breaking. Hopefully this is Jakes last cycle. Bella killing him instead of Edward would make the lasting blow. Maybe she finally needed to see he isn’t redeemable and Edward needed to talk to her and she she needed the strength. Fingers crossed. I don’t know if it was planned but now her speech patterns match his. Cool.
QueenGB chapter 18 . 8/10/2019
Can’t Alice see her decision not to tell Edward she cannot have children? God I wish the doctor made an error when he tied her tubes. She said she hadn’t be with Jake in years. Cosmically these two timeless lovers deserve a break. I really like how Bella’s taking this head on with strength and purpose. Edward is to afraid at this point which is very understandable. Well done.
QueenGB chapter 17 . 8/10/2019
Jeebus! Now that was an exciting and jam packed chapter. Now, let’s finally kill James m’kay. Again was this Charlotte, Peter and Jane’s first life or did they meet before that life? Typically reincarnation is done until a lesson is learned. I wonder what it is? So far things are different this time right?
QueenGB chapter 15 . 8/9/2019
Okay Bella seems like she’s fracturing because her souls other lives are merging. I would think myself crazy too so they have to tell her WTF. Oh and ‘say it out loud’ so we can know too:-D hehe
QueenGB chapter 14 . 8/9/2019
So they started out this journey as Charlotte and Peter? Who was Jake?
QueenGB chapter 13 . 8/9/2019
The lemon was great the fore play poetry was better. What does Edward have to redeem. I can’t wait for the full explanation.
QueenGB chapter 12 . 8/9/2019
How To Cook A Wolf is amazing.

Jacob is sick.

Bella needs to listen to Jasper and get a restraining order and a lawyer.
QueenGB chapter 11 . 8/9/2019
So is it because somehow they are all inextricably linked that Jake figured out the mind reading while drunk off his ass? And Bella has been suspicious too. Also since Renee is still alive where is she? Why doesn’t she call from Phoenix? Are Rosalie and Emmett going to be active in the story? Carlisle and Esme?Okay, Okay I’ll wait and see. ;-)
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