Damn that was some powerful stuff

Hey! This is beautiful!

Woah...

This fanfic is definitely one of the best I have ever read. I was literally crying while reading it. I love the use of lyrics from the song in the story, that made it so much more emotional. Thumbs up to you, thank you for writing this :)

Found this on a rec list for DP angst. Did not disappoint on that front.

Very intriguing and well written. This is a very beautiful Danny Phantom fanfic, and I appreciate the time you took to write it.
-Nursing Student

I'm actually in tears. I love this song so much. I even turned on a piano version once I figured out what you were doing. And it only made it all the more sad.
It was short but packed full of so much emotion. This was just beautiful.

I just fell in love with your beautiful and stunning fic. Thank you very much for writing such gem for everyone.

That was so depressingly beautiful. I don't have the words, but I definitely have the feels...they're spilling down my cheeks.

This made me cry. It was absolutely fantastic; the way you rhymed made it sound smooth and poetic, and drifting, and ethereal, and yet it somehow fit into the prose parts, so that the whole thing sounds like a real situation. It's both believable and magical at the same time. The lack of dialogue, I think, helps with this, and makes you feel like you're just watching the situation, separate... Sort of like what both Danny and Jazz are going through... I think you also created these two very real characters in both Jazz and Danny that make them incredibly identifiable, at least for me. Thank you, so much, for writing this.

This story gave me so many strange feelings I'm not really sure what to do with myself! Aah!

Dash

So here's the thing. I've been reading nothing but Danny Phantom fics for the past week, and nothing has blown me away as much as this one. No DP fic has brought me to tears until now. This was breathtakingly beautiful, bittersweet and filled with pretty words. I love Jazz and Danny and their sibling bonding moments. I'm a sucker for introspection and character studies. I am easily drawn to fics that delve more in the deep intricacies of Danny's dual existence as a ghost and as a human, his interactions with people who both know and don't know his secrets.

This is just amazing. I rarely cry in fics, but this brought me to tears because it was just so lovely and bittersweet. I loved the way you played with words and connected Danny's soul searching to his love for outer space. I especially loved the line about Danny finding himself, and losing himself along the way. It just felt so... hollow how he became disinterested and lost, and it's heartbreaking to see Jazz worry about her brother and wanting him to come back, to miss her, to be human. I loved the note about him not changing back to human for so long. The sad notion that Jazz may be old - or she may not even be alive anymore - by the time Danny comes back. He has no concept of time or age anymore; he has all the time in the world, and Jazz will wait for him until her death.

I'm easily drawn to this kind of writing style and Jazz/Danny sibling fics so my bias could have something to do with it, but I really like this fic. It broke my heart, and yet I fell in love with the writing anyway. I swear, this was one of the most beautiful DP fics I've read thus far. You did a really good job.

Ok so... I've read this a thousand times. I'm not a big reviewer, so I didn't really think about it, but I read it again today and... wow. When I read this, for some reason I always read it out loud. It's more... I don't know, serious, that way. It leaves more of an impression, I think. Anyways, it makes cry every time, especially when I get to the end and she says she doesn't even think she'll be alive the next time he comes back, but she's ok with that, as long as he's happy... It's heartbreaking. It reminds me of Tuck Everlasting actually, and I cry every time I watch that. I know, I'm a baby.
Back to the point, this is amazing! Keep writing!

I love this so much-it is a refreshing piece that had nothing to do with those over-used plot lines. The story is so beautiful itself, and you grasped the emotions perfectly. Great, great work.

...Woah.

Why doesn't this have dozens, even hundreds of reviews?

I've never read anything like this, and I probably never will again, because it's just so...incredible, I think, is the only word that can start to describe this.

It's a different take on the post-series, something I'd never expect, but it makes sense at the same time. The way you've written it entirely from Jazz's point of view, like she's talking to Danny, and tying in his love for space...

I wish I had more words to tell you how amazing this story is. I just hope you understand from this review :)