Loved this!

Aww, cute and hot. I love Nathan and Audrey together, they make the best couple. Thanks for sharing. :D

Love it!

I hope there wil be a updat of thid story.

Jesus Christ, I could barely handle the perfection that is this fic. Seriously, so hot! and you wrote it so beautifully. Definitely one of my fav one shots ever. Thank you!

this was beautifully written

Brilliant! You do such an amazing job of describing Nathan's affliction, what it must be like for him!

Brilliant! You do such an amazing job of describing Nathan's affliction, what it must be like for him!

Love it. Thanks for the story.

Very sweet story...I love it

This was so great! I love the way you wrote the characters - the whole story was perfect :)

Wow, I mean wow, wonderful fic. Love the way you describe Nathan thoughts.

Thank you that as beautiful and perfect and the story i have been looking for since I started watching this show and reading fan fic. Any chance of a sequel.

Beautiful job telling it form nathans pov with just the right amount of longing, pain and awe. Really fantastic thank you for sharing.

This is wonderful. And this line? "And if he lets her know, spooks her or weirds her out, she'll be gone in a flash and his world will go back to being gray and dull and numb. Which is when he will finally stick his nine millimeter in his mouth and pull the trigger. He wonders if he would feel that." Just guh!

Guh. Loved this. Brain not capable of better words right now. Truly, truly lovely.

Great story