Type your review a useless fic so mito hahaha where she just pop out of nowhere useless fic a useless fic useless

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It’s a good story .. but .. the one real flaw is that you keep needlessly stressing certain things about Naruto.. namely his growth as a person ... it’s obvious he had matured greatly... he is nearly 100 as you happen to stress and has been Hokage for 40 years and Married to what 6 ... 7 woman ? and raised how many children? ... NATURALLY HE HAS MATURED ... there is no need to stress that so much ... other then that it is a good and interesting story... hope you’re continuing it ...

Naruto doesn't leave chaos... He leaves a maelstrom behind him in his wake... That or it follows him.

... That feeling when you're unhappy because your favorite character is written as the most homophobic being in existence, feeling the need to throw up at the thought of 2 men together? How much more homophobic can you get?

You guys should know, Freedom Guard passed away back in August 2015

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And still to this day this story is drowning in the river abandonment lol

moooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

loving the story.

i'm loving it so far.

Please continue.

Needs a new chapter Good story

You have someone sneaking in and taking Naruto's place lol.

As the virtual Vanguards tripped and stumbled over one another, Jura became disgusted and left her simulator.

"I've had enough! Why can't this machine move with more elegance? I'm out of here!" With that she quickly exited the room in a huff.

Kyo shook his head in disappointment. Though she didn't know it herself, Kyo could tell that Jura had good potential as a Vanguard pilot or a Mobile Suit pilot, though she lacked the skill, experience, and lastly the patience. He then had to admit that she was still one good pilot and not a bad looking one either. He quickly shook his head to steer clear of those thoughts before they would go to rather indecent areas. He directed his gaze to the other remaining pilots.

Also watching the pilots' performance via pulse monitors, Duero nodded as he then checked the statistics on the pilots as they continued their training.

"Looks like I'll be needed at the bridge."

And here as well

She then touched her lips and began then to wonder on just HOW did Naruto withstood the food she had doctored and if he was not lying that he had eaten much spicier food than that one.

The enhanced Vanguard and the drop-ship began to make fiery reentry paths into the planet as they moved through the atmosphere. As soon as they passed through the clouds and cooled down, the drop-ship broke apart, letting its cargo experience freefall for a period of a few seconds. The Vanguards then deployed umbrella-like devices to float all the way down to the surface.

Inside his Vanguard, Kyo watched the ground approach through the main viewer-screen. He had already decided to upgrade Freedom's OS but he had to do it quick, Freedom whipped up it's own small sandstorm when it landed on the surface.

And here as well

"For the love of common sense! Look! Either go and find Meia right now and get her back here so we can leave or we can all stay here and lose everyone! Now get moving Barnette, we don't have all day!"

Jura's friend growled irritably, but realized the truth of Naruto's words. She then went off in search of Meia, while Kyo and the others readied themselves for the new battle.

next chapters please