Reviews for When Foxes and Weapons Mix
Monster King chapter 18 . 7/27/2019
Great job I hope you continue
LD 1449 chapter 1 . 12/9/2018
Suggestion.

If you're gonna do a full re-write. I would change the premise a bit. One thing that 'distinguishes' Tenten from other kunoichi of Konoha is her fannon strength of personality. She may not be the physically strongest of the kunoichi but unlike Hinata and Sakura and so on, Tenten seems relatively independent and strong willed enough to survive Gai's training.

So the premise of this fic, her being 'heartbroken' by Neji rejecting her, kinda undermines that and makes Naruto come swooping in to rescue a girl who shouldn't need to be rescued so to speak.

As such, make Tenten take the innitiative here, both for Neji and Naruto.

For example (Different point in time but its the only thing I can think of off the top of my head)

Say during the Chuunin exam, when Neji hurts Hinata and Naruto promises to make him pay for it, Tenten (who canonically didn't witness this but for this story can be made to) decides that Neji needs to get taken down a peg or three and so she promises to help Naruto achieve just that.

This gives *her* character agency and shows a personality that isn't dependent on the protagonist (Naruto) Whereas the original premise of the fic robs her of both. She is made vulnerable by Neji and loses her agency as a character by needing Naruto.

That's my opinion anyway. Change the situation at the start if you want Tenten to be an equal rather than someone needing a crutch to pick herself up.
Aqua Rules chapter 18 . 4/3/2018
Okay cool! Glad you are back and ready to finish this one. :)
Guest chapter 18 . 1/14/2017
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blasterdog chapter 18 . 10/2/2016
Nice chapter
Eddie shadow chapter 18 . 9/22/2016
YOSH! THE FLAMES OF YOUTH STILL BURN BRIGHT IN THIS STORY! SUCH A YOUTHFUL CHAPTER! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE IF I CANT CONTAIN MY EXCITEMENT ILL... ::ahem:: I mean it's good story and I'm glad is continued. I like Naruto x Tenten very few done right. I hope the next chapter comes soon. Love the story.
Nirvash77 chapter 18 . 9/22/2016
Awesome chapter! Good to se this story is still kicking.
cathyscloud9 chapter 18 . 9/20/2016
Glad to see an update! Awesome chapter
Falcon800 chapter 18 . 9/20/2016
How much u wanna bet it's Akatsuki Hiashi is doing a deal with?
snake1980 chapter 18 . 9/20/2016
been awhile but still great job on the new chapter and what a way to end the chap. cant wait to see what hiashi has done
DavidC20OfficialWriter chapter 17 . 1/19/2016
Well, we're finally see the reunion between Naruto and Tenten after some problems, but i think that this is just the beginning...

I expect a lot of surprises about these 2 in future chapters, CONGRATULATIONS!
Nirvash77 chapter 17 . 1/11/2016
Great to have you back. And great job on pulling my heartstrings, you monster! Lol. But seriously, awesome chapter!
cathyscloud9 chapter 17 . 1/10/2016
soo cute!
DavidC20OfficialWriter chapter 1 . 1/10/2016
this 1st chapter was amazing, Naruto and Tenten are finally found the love in eachother...

Well, i want to know how Hinata, Sakura, Sasuke, Neji and the others handle with this surprise!

this is just the beginning of something interesting, CONGRATULATIONS!
JamDonut chapter 17 . 1/10/2016
Awww! I love how they made up
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