So far this is my favourite bones fan fiction you captured there character so perfectly. I can actually see this kind of thing happening on the show you did really well.

Oh poor Sweets!

Your writing style is very interesting, enjoying this immensely so far very well executed

Aw, a cute ending to conclude a cute fic! I love this. You wrote all of the characters perfectly. The writing itself was good, except that you misspelled "definitely" and at one point said "mines" rather than "mine". Other than that, A man

I really enjoyed reading this story. You captured both Sweets and Booth very well. This line in particular, really hits home for me, "Again, I nod. I'm not done here yet. I'm not sure if I ever will be."

I also really like the return to baked potatoes at the end.

Well-written.

OwO Poor Sweets! . . . . . Very well written! Please write more!

Nice job so far :) looking forward to the next chapter xx

Woaw ! I only read the first chapter for now, but I love it ! I'll read the second chapter now, but, I want say to you than I love your story ! :D

I enjoyed your story. My two favorites on Bones right now are Sweets and Booth, so I was thrilled to find some stories with the 2 of them. I loved their interaction with each other, with Booth all uncomfortable and Sweets all apolgetic. Thanks!

That was a very nice story. Good job!

I don't read Bones very often, and this is one of few Bones fics I actually like enough to fave. The situation was realistic and the characters were very IC. nice job

very sweet story :)

Great. Just great. Now I want a baked potato!

I loved this! Keep up the great work!

I love this story! Fantastic job

I love that Booth got Sweets, and their dialogue was great! Wonderfully written, thanks!