I actually want to say there is a actual Ninja in the school quite skilled in fact but nothing compared to what Naruto can do in the Manga, and her name is Kaede who has the second largest breasts in the class.

You will have to level up Naruto to insane levels you have read Negima you do know that Negi becomes insanely powerful.

I am liking this part because Evangeline is one of my favorites in the story but how does she handle Naruto.

He is doing a great job in hiding his true skills and who he is from everyone but eventually it will come because in Mahora Mages exists as well as Ninjas.

I am surprised that Kaede hasn't figured out that Naruto is a Ninja yet because she is a Kunoichi in the story.

That's some rescue the blonds got, though I guess it's understandable as he did die or was it almost died?

amazing can't wait for chapter 12

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I thought Naruto was Hokage, how come three CIVILIAN thugs where able to SCRATCH him? Minato destroyed armies of ninja without trouble, and his son's getting injuries from a couple of civilians... no wonder Konoha was slaughtered with such a weak ass leader...

F U CK you with feeling. The dean is a COMPLETE stranger. Your telling me that naruto would tell him EVERYTHING when it took naruto FOREVER to admit outloud he's a jinchuuriki.

i like your story but i must say that your naruto i say wimp, he is clearly weaker than canon naruto : he fall from a weak kick of evangeline ? a really weakened evangeline ? an evangeline who is physically weak even when she is a full power ? also Naruto while brash and not really subtle is a ninja and here he is not able to follow eva whiteout being found while when he was twelve he could sneak past ANBU ? also his scratch on is cheek should have healed instantly, after all he has both the Uzumaki and the jinchuriki Healing factor.

Why do I feel that you're getting lazy in this chapter? I mean, in this chappy Naruto doesn't do much out of creating clones and leave it at that. I'm actually bored and annoyed when Naruto says 'I trust you, Negi!' and leaves. If that's what he's doing, then why do you have Naruto tailing the groups in the first place if nothing is going to happen? If he isn't going to do much, then you should've skip this part.

Overall, this chapter is really lacking when the whole point of Naruto in this chapter is being there, says Hi to the students, asking What are you guys doing?, shuts up and then leaves. At this point, he would be around the same value as side characters that aren't even worth mentioning.

On the positive note, looks like the poll will finally be closed. After many years, I would like to hear the results but judging from this chapter, I don't see my other favorites going to Naruto. *sighs* Still have hope for them though.

Why is your Naruto giggling he's 16 man he shouldn't be giggling unless he's doped up or a kid. Besides that please get a beta so many times I had to fill in words that were misplaced in your sentences. Anyway your plot is pretty static nothing is really changing Naruto just there a few new dialogue is all he seems to bring. Hopefully it changes soon cause otherwise this is just canon with a guest appearance from Naruto.

awesome chapter!

lots of plot holes, and all you are doing is adding Naruto to Negima without really changing anything about the plot.