The overuse of italicized words in the flashback makes my brain fluid explode and come bursting out of my ears, cascading like Niagara Falls. It really and truly bugs the cradoodles out of me. Please change the italics back into plain wondrous writing, or else I will go to planet Earth, where I believe the author lives, and lure her to a dark alley. You have been warned.

I loved this but what happened to Alistar?

Great ending! The characters were very in-character

Wow your descriptions are excellent. It's almost as if it was written by Anthony Horowitz himself

I simply loved the end. Through the story, I harboured different feelings about it and while there were parts that I didn't especially like, I still really appreciate this opportunity to read your story. One of these aforementioned things is Jack's betrayal. While I can understand her desire to protect Alex, I feel that she should've told him, so he would be, well, better prepared. I like the way how you developed Alex as a character, and would simply love to read something about his work as Deputy/Head of MI6. Maybe some kind of sequel from his POV? Great story.

This was one of the best Alex Rider fanfics I have ever read!

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG! Yassen has a son?! PLOT TWIST! Wait...does that mean Yassen had a wife...or girlfriend? whoa...

28 y. old... and Head of MI6... Kind of good isn't he!

Per-to the-fect! PERFECT

Please please please do a sequel!

I only just found this story. It's great. I like Alex's actions, but I would like to know more about Alistair. Any more in this 'verse?

Love it!

This was awesome. Definitely a good read. I kind of want to know what happened to Alistar. I suspected his betrayal, but it still came as a surprise. Thanks for writing!

Amazing :-)

Niice! But does this mean that this fic is over? Sorry, I'm on the mobile site rite now and can't tell :)