That was almost like a prose poem. Nice.

I think it's just fine (well, it's really great, but... oh, you know what I mean). Short and sweet.

Aww. This is so short that I actually just checked it out to see... well, why it was so short.

But this is really, really sweet. Sad, and bitter, but sweet. Even though you didn't write much, you captured these bitter feelings and the atmosphere.

I'd really love to read something longer from you!

Oh, and about the title, I like this one. :3

-Everything to know about life can me summed up in three words: it goes on -