Amazing, it could have one or two more chapters but that's ok!

Wow. Poor kid. Awesome job.

-D101

Despicable man! I do hope he asked for something to eat, or at least to quench his thirst. Stupid man, these women are healers, know all about herbs. Hopefully, they would distill something into his food or drink to sicken him for the entire night.

As you can see, I really got caught-up in your story.

Sorry you didn't win; I found it very engrossing.