| Reviews for Naruto Bearing Pain And Love |
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   jamthacreator chapter 5 . 2/22 Amazing story please continue it! |
| u chapter 1 . 9/11/2019 WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow...,... M |
| Player Tauz chapter 1 . 11/2/2018 References for god of war ? " my vengeance ends now " |
| Valkipher chapter 1 . 6/5/2018 Bruuuuuhhh...God of War reference? really? |
| Stagking2012 chapter 1 . 3/2/2018 God of War reference nice. |
| Artorias78 chapter 1 . 5/31/2017 God of War references in the first chapter?... cool! |
| jtcr chapter 1 . 4/9/2017 Holy shit. That was seriously dark. |
| The Crimson Apocrypher chapter 18 . 7/21/2016 You've always done good work with this story since I first came across it a long time ago, but you have one thing you really need to improve: the excess space you put before punctuation marks like commas and periods. That blank space creates a visual break in your writing that makes it difficult to keep going. For some readers like me, such a simple error - especially repeated en masse - almost makes it impossible to want to stay focused on the material. By removing these spaces, your work would become that much better. |
| aSinglePancake chapter 1 . 6/19/2016 wait...so he dies...i dun wanna |
| Raikaguken chapter 1 . 9/23/2015 wow dark way to start a story |
| Anime Student chapter 17 . 8/27/2015 Very good chapter! I'm glad for the update! |
| SinfulNation chapter 12 . 6/21/2015 You missed part of the song in chapter 11 and chapter 12 there were 250 clones not 200 |
| yindragonkiba chapter 16 . 6/1/2015 Loved it |
| SaucyHandles chapter 2 . 12/15/2014 I see it is fixed for the most part. With that said, I have to comment on how badass this story is so far. I hope it stays consistent. |
| SaucyHandles chapter 1 . 12/15/2014 You're putting an unnecessary space before each of your comma's. Remade the first chapter , going to remake blah blah blah. It should be: Remade the first chapter, going to remake blah blah blah. Simple fix. |
