Isabel and Broderick? Whoa. I did not see that coming. xD

As always, this story was amazing, as were the rest of yours. And, as always, it's going to my favorites. ;)

*For the future of the Earth, I'll be of service*

*Mew Ichigo*

Nice poem. ;) Nice theory too.

YO JO.

XD

Anyway. Even if the underlined stuff was annoying to my eyes, the rest was tolerable and the story in the freeverse is just great.

(I can see why they call you the Queen of Crack!ships. You can pull off any pairing if you put your mind to it. If I asked nicely, would you write a Sinian? ;D)

I like how you made Isabel a sweet, innocent Woobie, and then slowly morphed her into a deranged, sadistic psychopath with no regard for anyone or anything but herself. 8D

Good for you! I like torturing my characters too. (it rhymed. see what I did, thar?)

Long review short: Nice job. Poetry isn't my thing, but I like this~

Danke much.

*Theia 47

JO!

What have you been doing lately?

If you've had any spare time at all, (though you don't, you said in your PM) you MUST write another one!

Thanks to you, I'm an Isabel/Broderick shipper! Congrats on being the first person to convince me!

XD

~Iris Cornelia Jade

Very original, same as ever. I love the way you always know just what to do (italicise, bold, underline, whatever) in just the write place. It's like looking at a painting-then again, writing /is/ an art. At least, it is when it's done correctly, like in here.

~/-\lexandera

i love this story

Wow! You're an awesome poet!

You had very interesting logic behind this story. I'm REALLY wondering if Broderick is a Vesper or not, though. The Black Book said that he knew nothing about the clues before he married Cora. I'm not sure if the book and the cards are contradicting each other or not. Hmm...

Well, keep up your great writing skills!

~BB99~

-i love how everyone assumes that jonah gets his 'skills' and 'talent' from cora but in this view the best actor of all is broderick cuz no one ever even suspected him to be a vesper (except for us totally innocent readers... mwahahaha). i love this thought it makes me laugh to myself at random times and nobody knows why and they look at me funny and im like 'this is AWK-WARD' and theyre like 'yeah...'

-ill admit it was a little confusing but i loved it all the same before AND after i figured it out in my messed up little mind

-i love all your different crack!ships. they make me smile and roll on the floor laughing and puke raise my eyebrows all weird-like and look suspiciously from side to side all at the same time

this makes me feel sorry for jonah. everyone on this site is always hatin on him. hes really not that bad of a person. didnt yall read into the gauntlet?

-i usually dont read fics about the previous generation but your free verse are just so painfully unbearablely amazing. *sniffle*

-it seems in the series we never get to see into the mind of the evil isabel. here she doesnt seem so bad! ugh! stupid conflicting emotions!

well thats all for now! stay awesome!

heart u

fanclubofme

j

Wow. Geeze. Now I feel guilty. This was an awesome poetry free- verse. I write in free verse a lot of the time. Not on , but at home, and it's 50/50. This was good. I really enjoyed it. And yes, sadly it does make sense now. It was an interesting crack!pairing. I enjoyed it very much. And it does make sense the way you put it. Just like 21 Years and all your other stories.

*sigh* You're too good.

Please keep up the good work!

~L~

*sniffle* This story made me slightly sad. *sniffle* Interesting plot though, and as usual, interesting pairing. )

Umm can you make one of these but for Amy and Jonah because I don't know why but those two seem to amuse me

You seem to not only have a keen sense for sniffing out the improbable pairings (not really improbable, as we don't know much of the Cahills' backstory in the first place) but also quite ready to take on the risks. I found it a possible enough scenario, and I thought the writing style was quite unique, though I must say it wasn't easy to format. Free verse is quite an interesting thing to manipulate, isn't it? You have complete reign over how you present a certain subject, and that's the beauty of it.

Well done. :)

~Wings~

I don't like your writing style, it is totally confusing

Original. Very original. Like "a breath of fresh air" from all those Amy/Ian fanfics :) (not that they're bad..)

Poor Isabel. Is that why she's so mean?

Jitter