WOW, I love how you made this into a stroy, very nice!

Very cute story! loved it! great job! keep up the good work!

This was a very interesting dramatic monologue, not a very common type of story. I don't agree with some of the things Terry said about Bruce, but I guess interpretation has a lot to do with that. I just have a soft spot for Bruce in my heart that makes me always think of him as a good guy, even when he gets a little dirty.

I think you got Terry and Matt really well in this. Kudos.

An excellent story. It has to take place after the Batman Beyond movie. Keep up the good work.

lol, very cute

hey, this is an interesting take on batman :) pretty good :)

The story was decent, but your style is kind of jaring since its so far from the usually, almost generic writing style.