Draco! You rotten little brat!

Poor Severus... I want to give the man a hug (even if he'd slug me for it). You wrote his emotions really well, I could just imagine how he must have felt.

Oh, damn. That's just ... sad. Brilliant, but sad.

That was too sad. Poor Snape! T_T

"You *clobber* hateful, *slap* evil *thwack* little cockroach. Wait till I..oh..um..hi Keppie" *stupid grin* "I'm not ...um..beating him up..I wasn't"

Congrats on making it through week 1! I did like this one but it didn't evoke quite the emotional response that scarysnapey's did.

For the contest, I would have eliminated all the beginning stuff about potions and started from the point were Snape comes back into his office to see Draco with the picture, then I would have expanded his feelings about the picture and the emotions going through him as Draco, that rat bastard!, puts it in the flames.

Good luck next week!

Very good. I really enjoyed this. Well done. :)