Great story lets see what happens next !

great chapter justinching to read the next one

It's getting good, but PLEASE make the chapters longer. PLEASE!

My friend... god damn you for ending this and not updating. I am now obsessed with your stories... hope you're happy.

Good story so far, can't wait to see where you go with it.

this is one of the best fan fics i have ever read ! please i beg you o great "god of naruto fanfics" please update soon!please!

Your Hiashi is extremely ooc. Hiashi is the sort of guy who will politely stab you in the back. He'll do it in such a way that at the very least the act won't harm him politically. At best, he'll frame a political enemy to take the fall for the act.

Your version of Hiashi is a hot headed, overly emotional idiot. He doesn't think. He has no filter between his brain and his mouth. He pays no attention to political currents. All in all, he's a failure as a politician.

So yeah, ooc.

You need to slow down a bit. You're plot is jumping around like a rabbit with it's tail on fire. Take time to fully develop each scene.

keep writing. its good, im mad it stopped

I love this story. Please update soon

awesome make more plz! and your sturies could use a little mor length. emphasis on "little more length"

hmmm...nice story. Don't slack off. Update soon! (teehee i have promblems when it comes to waiting)

This is a nice chapter. I hope that you will post a few more soon. Good luck.

I have read a lot of storys where the Hyuuga clan a side agenda to turn the last member of the Namikaze clan by using Hinata and her feelings for naturo, but it never gets old. Especially with all the diffrences in each fic.

I can only guess that Hinata will try to get naruto and then finds him with sakura, causing a catfight and probably making Hinata a side antagonist for Sakura.

Keep up the great work and hope to the next update soon.

Not to be a killjoy, but at age 12 Sakura cared more about getting her outfit dirty then she did about Naruto. NSo with him gone for six years I find it unbelievable that she would miss him one bit. None of the reactions in this chapter seem real and everything is being forced down out throats. Flesh it out more and slow the pace down by about 95 percent. Otherwise those who aren't hardcore Sakura fans like foxy who'll read anything Sakura and lap it up like a dog. Will be interested in reading further. I'm not a hater of Sakura, but I don't liked a forced romance/drama no matter the female.

I doubt anything will be changed since I've seen nobody call you out on it yet and you're quite a few chapters into the story. Plus the Kyuubi thing is another major road stop for me as I mentioned before, but I thought I'd give it another chapter anyways. Two is enough for me though, so I'll leave the above food for thought for next story you may or may not write.