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Good story

It's pretty good, pretty grousum, and if not but simple and clean towards the end... but why don't you like happy endings? They're good to have and oh so sweet.

If Roxas won't kill Seifer, I will. (magically jumps into the story, brutally kills Seifer Almasy for raping Naminé, returns to real world like nothing ever happened) Great story!

really good

Oh! So sweet! Please go on! I want Roxas to take her! Obviously her virginity was already taken, but they could forget it and just move one with a good night of passion! Please go on!

:)

Well, you asked for reviews...

Could have been longer, as i sorely want to see Seifer being killed (what?).

Good for a 'hurt' fic, but you really need to do something outrageous. If there's an 'M' rating, make it deserving of a higher rating!

Now, where's this murder fic? I've been reading too much gentle stuff today.

somting tell me if she was feeling better she would pounce on roxas *wink wink* I'm so stupid XDDDDDDDD

Siefer really is a bastard. This is probably one of the best hetero pairings in KH,so, happy I got to read it! Not exactly the ending you would expect (or that YOU expected to write) but still pretty touching. ****

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~Underthedarkness