This is a very good story. The characters, the plot, the action, the detail of it is outstanding. Neal was brilliant Peter was skeptical, Mozzie was worried and Elizabeth was clueless. This is generally how a viewer of the show could describe them at any time! Keller was intriguing, but his over confidence cost him his freedom. Neal's conversation with Peter in the hospital was very good. I wished for Neal to be that direct with Peter but I think he hides his hurt.

Thanks for writing, and for leaving posted. I don't know if you are still involved in writing but I wanted to review anyway.

Truly amazing story. I can really tell how dedicated you were to it

good fic. Keller deserves to be behind bars.

Kudos :)
This is a really good read - once started I couldn't stop till I had read it all. Good work!

OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD!

DAMN IT PETER! WHT THE FUCK IS HE THINKING!? HE JUST TOLD KELLER THAT NEAL HAD BEEN LEAVING MESSAGES! WHAT THE FUCK?!

YES!

love it

Very nice story! I really liked how the investigation came along, how they put the clues together. It made sense and seemed to me like it could really have happened like this. And of course I loved the Neal whump :-)

3x50 totally epic story! XD

great story

This was great actually. I know that I will never look at the words 'white collar' quite the same way LOL

oh I love the checkmate at the end there ;) Though I can't help but think Keller beat him more than the two times...

That was a really amazing story; thanks so much for sharing it. I loved the little details, like your research into the paintings, and the clues you laid along the way. It was a really engaging story and didn't go over the top; it felt very true to the show and realistic. Thanks!