Get your german straight, with these sentences noone would understand you, you cant just take the words and put them in the exact same places like the english ones. You say Ich schwöre, and noone says offizier anymore, ich dachte er sei achtzehn, or ich dachte, dass er achtzehn ist

This was such a beautiful story. The whole concept of it is heart moving. I am so glad I read this.

I totally get what you mean though I have written multiple fanfics...

You’re amazing!

Your making light to girly for a seme

This was really good. I always thought L sort of had a thing for Light and simultaneously Misa, but sort of buried any form of sexuality because of his focus on his work. And Light seemed asexual to me but I think this formula could be great. Keep up the good work.

PffffffHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

I CAN OH MY GODDDDDD

LOVE IT! First death note fanfic! So worth my time!

Lemon lemon lemon !
QUICKLY ! *µ* HUm hum... Good chapter, I love how much their relationship has a augmenter is... sensual... hot ? *µ*

Incroyale ! :
The best
revelation
ever !

I LOVE this chapitre ! so goog ! and see LIght persuaded him to be gay ... X) ! (désolé pour l'orthographe I'm french)

I think you should continue righting! Cause that was great!

Wait...what? Noooo! It ends at the good part. I wanted to see L's reaction to his family teasing Light. Not to mention that this story is utterly addictive! :(
Sigh...oh well. I respect your decision to not continue this fic.
I shall still follow this fic though..with the tiny hope that you might continue it in the future. Haha. :)

I really love this story it's amazing

Pleeease finish the story!
Can you write more LxLight stories...
I LOVE YOUR DEATH NOTE STORIES!

uh hell that was wrong

oh lord