Reviews for Harry Potter and the Heartlands of Time
JaehaerysTargaryen chapter 27 . 7/17
Fuck ... Just finished the sequel. This was pretty well written. The way you handled time travel was definitely original. It was a badass fucking story. I like the epilogue more than Deathly Hallows' but I guess anything is better than that epilogue. I liked that Fleur and Harry didn't just live together forever and ever with him being a mental fucking wreck.
This story was a lot of fun to read. Badass action scenes. Crazy suspense. Thanks for this! Take care.
JaehaerysTargaryen chapter 23 . 7/17
Okay...
I feel bad for Tonks. That's gotta hurt. Glad to see we've finally reached the endgame.
I love that we've got some progress. Harry has stopped random destruction and matured in a way he hadn't for thousands of years.
The twists really were unexpected. A lot of fun to read. Chronos and Saturnia are sort of complicated fuckers but then so is this entire story. Time has truly been fucked.

Really enjoyed reading this story and I guess Larry isn't so bad. He's just a misunderstood evil and vengeful God.
JaehaerysTargaryen chapter 11 . 7/15
It's nice to read about Hogwarts students going on adventures together. Eating pie and saving the world.
JaehaerysTargaryen chapter 6 . 7/14
"Either the minister wanted to be more than allies or Fleur was trying to tell me something."

hahahahaha love that line.
Now ... I was told of a certain three way involving Fleur Delacour, I believe?
JaehaerysTargaryen chapter 2 . 7/14
Umm... That was the most badass scene ever. Like ... ever
Maheshvara10 chapter 27 . 6/30
This is insane Fabric. I don't have words to discribe it. I like it.
Rhisika chapter 27 . 6/5
Well i didnt manage to keep up the one comment a chapter thing very long but at the close of this story I want to say thank you. This was an amazing timetravel story and it screwed with my head (which a good time travel story should). After a decade i am happy to see Harrys journey end. Thanks for writting this epic tale
infernofield108 chapter 27 . 5/27
Thank you, Joe.
Juka chapter 2 . 5/15
Another good chapter. Let's see where the ride takes us.

I guessed they were threatening either Tonks or Fleur. Mess with Harry and he'll hurt you. Mess with those Harry loves and he will grind you into dust.

Chronos seems a bit desperate to me. And it seems Harry still hasn't learned his lesson yet that he cannot win this war alone.

Thanks for chapter 2
Juka chapter 1 . 5/15
After a decade of anticipation and waiting for the end of the story, I felt it was only right to leave a review every chapter.

Not much new here since (as you said) it was a recap, but you got a laugh out of me with the movie title ;) can't wait to read on.
Salacommander1 chapter 27 . 5/14
10/10 It has a little something for everybody.
Cwhit930 chapter 27 . 5/12
Wow what a epic tale of magic, mayhem and struggle. A truly unique alternate universe for Harry Potter. Thank you for the dedication of a decade of your free time to create and finish this story. Thank you for the share.
Da Snack That Smiles Back chapter 22 . 5/3
Mate, if you changed the names of the characters and altered a couple HP incantations you’d have a whole ass original novel. I mean it’s hardly fanfiction is it? As far as I can tell, you pretty much built the whole world from the ground up and it’s impressive, and what’s more is that it’s entirely original. I’ll admit some parts flew over my head or didn’t make sense but this shit is brilliant, especially considering what’s usually floating around. I guess you’re an actual writer though, not a 14 year old girl, which has to count for something doesn’t it? Good luck with your writing career, maybe I’ll check out a couple books of yours or something yeah?
NazgulBelserion chapter 27 . 3/13
holy shit wtf wow what a fkin ride like wow
Mr. 16384 chapter 27 . 1/18
Thrilling, entertaining read.
I still kinda feel like the last few chapters were thrown together quickly, they feel a bit... disjoint, and not just because Harry is falling apart there. Some plot elements just kinda peter off in a weird way, too. Wastelands was certainly better focused (also, as an aside, I re-read Wastelands of Time and it's just as good as I remembered it being years ago).

Still, it's pretty damn good overall. It's certainly easier to be more specific when complaining than when praising, but the story consistently kept me wanting to continue reading it.
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