such cute fluff

That was so cute!

"Unlike humans, my body temperature is [lower] and requires me to wear more insulated attire even in lightly chilled air."
Fixed it.

So cute I loved it! xx

THE FLUFF! Beautifully fluffy stories are always a joy to read. :)

This is a really great story~ You did an amazing job!

Umm, just wondering...Would you like me to go through and fix your grammatical errors? I noticed a few, and thought it was a shame that such a nice story wasnt as perfect as it could be. It's just a few words here and there, you used the wrong "thew" instead of "through" a few times, forgot a few e's at the end of some words...I would love it if you'd let me go over it for you.

i love the story overall, but there are several spelling mistakes that really destroy it for me... for instance, you meant to say "on board," but instead said "on bored"

simple mistakes like these really annoy me.

other than that, I think it flows very well, and i just love how you convey spock

Aww... how adorable. I loved it.

awww

What a sweet little piece of fluff. This was a lot of fun to read. You could stand to double-check your spelling, though, especially your use of its and it's. Only use the latter when it's short for "it is;" otherwise use its. Also, dammit is properly spelled without an n. Don't take all my nitpicking the wrong way - I only pick on the small stuff because this story is of such quality that there's not too much else to improve upon. On the whole this is an absolutely wonderful fic and I hope you write more in this universe.

Good fic.. Tough, you need a beta.

This was a cute story, but I have a couple of suggestions. Always read over your story before posting - there were a number of spelling errors and confusing wording/phrasing that could have been easily fixed (like using 'bored' when it should have been 'board', 'threw' instead of 'through'). Also, with Starfleet Academy being based in San Francisco, it probably wouldn't be cold enough for snow and ice. So Jim most likely would not have been wearing a scarf, being a human and used to the climate and temperature... I don't mean to be nit-picky, because I really did enjoy the story. It was a cute little fluffy piece :)

:) cute.

Dr Nimoy, heh, love it.

very pleasing fluff, but please run it through the spellcheck/dictinoary!; the "threw"s instead of "through"s where irritating, and the phrase:"his quarters wasn't close, but still not far enough" made absolutely no sense lol

Aw, that was so sweet! A bit rough at some parts, especially the last line (repetition), but still very much worth the read. _