Interesting! I kinda liked it..

Nice job!

Shigure-san.

This was so prfect and I love how you incorporated the music to the setting of the story.

I absolutely love this. I read it once before, and I wanted to reread but I apparently neglected to favorite, so I went through page after page of stories to find it. So worth it. The descriptions of summer and Rachel and how Finn feels are so beautiful and real feeling and make me miss summer and green grass. It's basically perfect.

I really enjoyed this. You capture Finn very well, and do him a lot of justice as to how he behaves.

thank you ! and keep writting !

holy crap. this fic, why hasn't it been in my life before? just, gosh. Finn is so precious in this; trying to grow up and getting caught up in all of the obstacles that get in the way - and then Rachel comes along, and he's not really a kid anymore, and just dskfjsdfh. my heart, so freaking cute. :333

and this line is the cutest thing: "THREE HUNDRED DOLLARS, shit, the things Finn could do with three hundred dollars, like buy a house for his mom". dkfjsdkfjsdk. your Finn is amazing, just throwing that out there.

favoriting. :D

Wow. This was just wow. (:

Perfect.

so I didn't see this before but I see it now. and my God, this is brilliant. I've always loved really reflective stories and this is one of the best. you can just write Finn so well. oh I loved the fact that you made Finn the catalyst for Puck's pool cleaning business and how you included Sean. and the fight about Artie and Tina, that was really cool because both characters can empathize and you feel bad for both of them. and I don't know, you just make it obvious as to why Finn and Rachel are my favorite couple on the show. fantastic job!

This was simply lovely. A really good, indepth look into Finn Hudson. Great job!

This was amazing. I love all the tiny background details you managed to incorporate (egging Rachel, how Puck's pool cleaning business started, Finn's friendship with Sean). The pacing and the progression of Finn's attitudes were spot on. And the ending- with Finn at peace with both Rachel and Puck- was great. Practically perfect in every way!

I truly enjoyed this. Getting inside Finn's head is always so much fun! I like that Finn was pretty much asked Quinn out because she instructed him to do so. The ending, of course, was my favorite part. I love that he was so content with Rachel and felt like everything was the way it was supposed to be. This was just lovely (I rarely use that word) and I'd love to see more Finchel stories from you!

awesome story :D

That was unbelievably wonderful both in characterization and in creative style, certainly one of my new favorites! With all these great Finchel fics coming out I'm just gonna hang up my guns and go back to letting pros like you do the writing!

really good