Aww, this was amazing!

I love this story so much; I wish it were longer.

Loved this! I am curious as to why she was crying, while driving, when she died. Did I miss that somewhere?

Aw. Made me cry. Great story! Thanks for writing:D

What a wonderful gripping tale! Thank you for posting this. I loved the forbidden love, and Bellas sacrifice. Sigh.

Oh.

Shes a Guide.

And Edward's a Guide.

And they have forever.

Holy fuck.

Thanks it writing.

Absolutly brilliant!

Really, really, REALLY like this story. My God, what an original. There was one other in this contest that I thought I liked best til I got to this, but damn! Such imagination, and to be able to make me care about them, and wrap it up, make me happy with the resolution without leaving anything hanging, is just f*cking astounding. So very very well done! Good luck in the contest!

Holy crap! That was fantastic! You took the concept of angels and demons and turned it into something completely original. Bella's struggle with her fate was so heartbreaking. Her sacrifice in light of the instincts instilled in her was nothing short of inspiring. I really thought this story was going to have me in tears at the end but you managed to pull off a surprise ending that actually felt like a surprise, not the cliché. I was enthralled from beginning to end.

Thank you so much for sharing your piece with the rest of us and I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

Good story! Thanks for the submittion.

*Clapping hands* So good!

wow, great o/s! so happy bella's finally back where she's supposed to be, and with edward!

So interesting, unique and enjoyable. I was completely enraptured in their journey.

Good luck! ;)

I really enjoyed this fic. I thought it was a very original idea. It gripped me the whole way through, I really loved it!

Loved it, thank you for sharing your work.