Cracking story, loved it. Although you had my heart pounding with fear when Nathan went missing.

I don't like the way Edward thinks he is tho only one who can make decisions about Nathan. I also don't like how you make Bella have very little to do with Nathan like it is all Edwards decision.

Great story. It’s refreshing sometimes to read about a less than perfect Cullen family! I’m glad that they had such a wonderful happily ever after.

Great story.

My second read still loved the story thank you abk

Ok. Wow. In the same chapter you’ve talking about the pieces that you’ve submitted to raise awareness/money for violence against woman- you have your main character Bella saying that she couldn’t maintain a relationship with her mother because she had an abortion and Bella could only see her as a murderer?
Yeah can’t read anymore, Bella is a judgemental small minded bitch, just can’t root for her.

His fathers affairs had nothing to do with edward,...he has no right to be that mad luke it was done to him. Also yeah he is using his dads hospital and snaeaking around...its not okay. Whats with him being disrespectful to Charlie? Hes lucky charlie didnt beat his ass before

My youngest son is Joshua Daniel.
I thought I had read this story before but it is all brand new to me.
It is great so far.

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Loved this story, even though I didn't really think that I would based on the summary. Thank you so much for sharing this with us, I truly enjoyed reading it.

Everything is moving in the right direction for them now.

Full circle for this family. Loved this story. Love the HEA. I am going to miss these people too. Thank you for this wonderful story.

Great chapter. Only low point was when Esme turned up drunk and had to be led away by the cops.

Fantastic story. Loved this. Things really changed for all of them, but it turned out well in the end. Thank you.

Finally. So many years and this was their second time.