I like the idea of the love triangle.

okey that's ...good

brilliant

Sucks

Not bad, keep it coming. I'm already willing to give it 4 stars.
P.S. as a Britannian, Shirley wouldn't be using Japanese formalities e.g. "Kallen-chan" or "Kallen-san"

Lets see... constructive criticism, well I never paid too much attention to Shirley in the anime so there, I guess you're going good. I'm enjoying it. The only thing that I can say bad is that occasionally you have the characters address each other with '-san.' I don't think they ever mention it in the anime, but with everyone in Britannian schools, learning their history, I figured that every area would be forced to learn Britannian (English). I could be wrong though.

Other than that, I'd like to see Lelouch getting his multi-tasking skills on. Getting with Shirley and smashing Brittania. I'm really interested in how everything will turn out. I hope you get over writers block soon and keep on keepin on!

I would love if u would write more. Pleaaasee3

aren't that many fics with lelouch and shirley so i hope you continue. its getting really good :)

great story please update the story soon .

Absolutely amazing chapter! Lovely as always. Are you going t ohave another confrontation with Mao like in the anime? Anyways keep up the good work.

This is a lovely story you have going. Keep up the good work!

ohhhh I love this! Please update! the lelouch and shirley pairing is the best one! I would love to see what you have planned for these two! can't wait to read it!

The thing with Mao can still be the same. He can call Lelouch and have CC meet him at Clovisland. Only this time Lelouch has the police shoot to kill. In the manga that's the way it happened. This way he doesn't kidnap Nunnally.

Good, still short, in cannon all the student council know where Lelouch lives Kallen finds out when she is introduced, however only Milly knows his origins.

Slices out

Okay so, I like the plot, the story and the character relationships, but the thing is, you have some grammar mistakes. I strongly advise you to double-check your story before posting it. I see something like you're rushing the story a little.

It's nice if you update fast, but the way I see it, you rush your story because maybe you have lityle time to write or something else, but if you are sure you're not rushing your story, forget I said this. Anyways, there's nothing else, just keep up the good work!

Hope you forgive me of I sound angry because I'm like that.

-Lovelie :3 - Number 1 Rick Riordan fan. ;)