| Reviews for Closer to God |
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   cloudshadow22 chapter 32 . 7/8 Rereading - my favorite chapter. |
| rburt1973 chapter 28 . 7/2 H |
| Lemonmelons chapter 22 . 5/23 Why would she have to apologize to Charly? He should be apologizing to her! |
| Lemonmelons chapter 3 . 5/23 Fuck this doctor! If a girl comes in for emergency contraception with a bite on her neck you do not make them feel can but you make sure that whatever had happened was consensual and that she's ok.. Sadly, your story is quite realistic. A good example of rape culture being ingrained in society. |
| feebes86 chapter 43 . 5/19 Hey MTR... it’s been a while and I’ve been doing some retreading. It won’t normally let me review your stories, since I’ve already reviewed everything but I get to leave you a message on this chapter. Paul Waggoner (WWSD/WWHT) is still my favorite Paul, the way you wrote him, he’s just “adorable.”But this story... I love this story! Maybe it’s something about the bad boy changing for the woman he loves? I’m not sure but that’s probably it. I agree with what you said, this Paul doesn’t have enough depth to do the story over from his point of view, but if you ever get bored and need something to write, his view of the break up and his version of the first few chapters, might be worth a look. Just a thought. Hope you are doing well and I hope you’re still writing. Hugs, Feebes. |
| RunsWithWolves77 chapter 41 . 5/17 Good story. Well written. It didn't fizzle out toward the end as many fics do. Clear plot with limited number of characters to keep track of. Good depiction of Paul. Thanks. |
| Ficxation513 chapter 43 . 5/17 just re-read. still one of my favourites! |
| dpennell007 chapter 43 . 4/17 I LOVED Paul so much in Apologies! It was one of the first fics I added to my favorite list when I finally got an account in October 2012. It might be time for a re-read. |
| dpennell007 chapter 42 . 4/17 Great payoff for both Paul AND myself after watching him go through the motions for 95% of the story as a less than worthy partner. He finally redeemed himself at the VERY last minute. How fitting to be out of the loop with his own willful daughter! I had to check out this story after following a Twitter conversation last week about your 3 fics with the most hits. This is the one I hadn't read, and I'm glad to have read it now. Excellent work! |
| Rebecca Ramirez chapter 43 . 3/7 I really loved this story. I can’t wait to read the new one, What is the title of the new fanfic? |
| Guest chapter 42 . 1/6 i really like this chapter because hes like a protective father |
| L-Anne Cullen chapter 29 . 12/14/2019 If Bella is 18 and graduated, she can do what she wants. She is an adult and doesn't need Charlie's permission. |
| sue1zide chapter 7 . 10/30/2019 I see that Jake's still a pathetic love sick puppy. |
| FrogEnchantress chapter 43 . 9/23/2019 Turned out great! |
| seaswimming chapter 42 . 9/22/2019 Really good story! Not gonna lie I cried a little. |
