Reviews for Some Alone Time |
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mylilkai chapter 1 . 1/10/2016 I think this could've been a short story |
Breeluv chapter 1 . 2/10/2012 I love this story its cute(: InuyashaKagome forever! |
oxsugarxcoatedxo chapter 1 . 7/31/2011 I love it. Especially the fact that oil was involved. Keep up the great work. |
kagomecathanyo chapter 1 . 5/10/2011 awsome story! |
ewatt.marion chapter 1 . 2/20/2011 I think you should write another one like this, with a vibrator. |
serenityselena chapter 1 . 2/10/2011 a very interesting night for our couple _ |
Kittycatgirl1995 chapter 1 . 11/30/2010 awesome |
Raven-2010 chapter 1 . 11/28/2010 hot hot hot Love this story" (_) |
purduepup chapter 1 . 11/26/2010 Oh, look. I'm reviewing again! :D YAYYYYYYY - INUYASHA: Shut the f**k up. T.T KAGOME: Jeez, you jerk! *angry face* PP: Yeah, what's wrong with you? MIROKU: :3 INUYASHA: *ignores Miroku's randomness* Well, you see, I just got dumped by Kikyou today... *sniffles* KAGOME: Awww, I'm sorry! *comforts with a hug* INUYASHA: *smirks at PP when Kagome's not looking, mouths "works every time..."* PP: O.O But hooray for lotion! *blows random party thingy* . I love how descriptive you are; it's not just like BAM! and getting it over with, but you go into detail about what they do and their reactions. :D The idea about lotion is common (*I* even have an idea about lotion! o.o), but you made this so amazing, it doesn't scream "CLICHE!" or anything; I honestly didn't realize there was a cliche until I began typing this, and believe it or not, that's a really good thing, to distract me like that. :D INUYASHA: You get distracted easily, idiot. PP: NO, I do NOT - HOLY S**T, IT'S RYAN SEACREST! :D RYAN SEACREST: SECURITY! PP: *gets tackled by Paula Abdul* INUYASHA: *laughs evilly...again o.0* No, but I really did enjoy this, and I'll most definitely check out "Truly an Addiction" next. . Oh, and I can relate to you; when I first began writing, I jumped for joy whenever I got a new email from FFN, whether it be about a review, favorite, or alert (heck, I still do it :P), and I love detailed reviews as well. So I can pretty much see where you're coming from. XD Anyway, I'm definitely looking forward to reading more of your stuffs! X3 |
Dragoon Galaxy chapter 1 . 11/7/2010 yeah this was good too |
Otaku-SIG chapter 1 . 10/22/2010 Hummm I'm gonna try some of that oil too.. haha |
WolfGirl1191991 chapter 1 . 10/1/2010 Again, short and sweet. You seem to a knack for getting the one-shots just right. |
purple chapter 1 . 9/26/2010 i like it |
Kagome chapter 1 . 9/26/2010 Nice story |