Reviews for The Serpent and the Mudblood |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue to chapter 7 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh please write more... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely loving this story ️️️. Love how they end up working together so we'll. |
![]() ![]() I love this story.. have always thought that she should have been with a Malloy as rob just seemed to weak. Please write another chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... That was an amazing story... Do add one more... |
![]() ![]() ![]() plz plz continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please do a seventh chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, lemony goodness! :) I know this story has been out awhile, but I just found it and I'm so glad I did! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'll suppose I'll have to say that it is a nice place to end this story, but I'd like to see more! :-) I'd love to see Lucius out of house arrest and more! Including Ron's eventual reaction about the two of them! :-p |
![]() ![]() ![]() A Chapter 7 would be lovely! Would love to see them down the road as a couple and Lucius out of house arrest. Would love to see everyone's reactions to Lucius loving Hermione. ;-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() My vote for another chapter (though this does have a nice wind down, completion kind of feel), but then again I'd never turn down more Lucius! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely love the story! I have been a "ghost reader" for the past few months in the Harry Potter fan fiction world, reading some wonderful stories but yours is the first that moved me to review. I would love for this story to be continued, but I understand if you do not (and the story is at a relatively nice place to end... Although it can be continued *cough* to the delight of your fans *cough*...) This is undoubtedly one of the best works of fan fiction I have read in a long time. I usually will just alert unfinished stories but this, this will end up on my favorites list... A list I haven't added to in quite a while. I know that this may sound like meaningless praise, empty complements, but I truly mean it when I say I love the story and wanted to let you, the wonderful author (that one sounded especially sarcastic, sorry... Try to read it without the sarcasm hahaha) know how much I appreciate and like your work. This is pertaining more to the actually story line, when you mentioned first getting Harry and/or Ron involved the first thing that popped into my head was Harry flooing in on Hermione and Lucius on top of his desk with Hermiones head thrown back over the edge, with her eyes closed... The next part I thought was either Lucius continuing, smirking at Harry until they finished or Hermione opening her eyes and seeing him. I know that people telling others what to do can be- no is awfully an ring and irritating, I just wanted to share my thoughts. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yeah...i think you should continue...though im not sure HOW it would continue...lol maybe with an eventual release of Lucius perhaps? |
![]() ![]() Holy crap that was the hottest fan fic or even erotic story I have ever read! You are very talented and I must see more! One thing though that drove me nuts was "I could care less." many people misuse this the correct quote is "I couldn't care less." Unless it was a Freudian slip which would make it brilliant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoy this fic. Please continue who knows maybe they somehow grow new feelings towards one another. |