TTUTT~ THAT'S SOOOOO MUUUUCH TOOTH ROTTING FLUFF AND FEEELZ! IT'S FRICKING WONDERFUL! ~

AWWWW. i love the ending part and why did the guards want to killed Dib and ZIM for they in this story are in love with each other man.

Aww.. :)

awwwwwwwwwwww that was so cute at the end with that is my heart :D

This wasn't formatted very well, and I had some difficulty reading it because there weren't page breaks between one character's dialogue ending and another's beginning. But the plot itself was pretty intriguing, and the ennding was warm and fuzzy. Yay. Good job. c:

thats really cute. :) yeahhhh im a zadr fan! hehehehe