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That was great! I like your ideas! And maybe you could try putting horizontal rulers in your stories. They're dividers that can be used to separate one area of the story from another. You can find them in the Edit/Preview option of the Doc. Manager and put them in if you want. Pretty nice. "End, as always, for now", I love it. You let the reader know they can expect even more wonders from you. Keep writing

And happily ever after...for the time being, of course! ;D

Good chapter/story, can't wait for the next one you write!

Quite nice probably. Not bad. Hoorah

Bowser betrayed Pauline; I actually saw that coming. And I truely feel sorry for Saphire cause Bowser has her now. I hope Mario and the others can save her.

Well, at least Pauline ain't all bad. Thank goodness.

And as far as reading this, I am motivated to do a Mario/Pauline romance story. Sure Mario/Peach is great, but that is always the case here, not many Mario/Pauline stories so I am going to do one sometime.

I laughed at Pauline like I said I would. Oooh Pauline got double crossed by Bowser! Who saw that coming lol. Anyways, the name's Hopefaith2. You kinda missed the "2" in my name, but it's cool. I can't wait till you update again!

Good chapter! Thank goodness Snoopy heard Autumn and Pauline's cry for help and hopfully they can rescue Saphire from Bowser!

Great chapter! ) Anyway all I really have to say is Saphire must really like to sing, right? I do hope Mario can save them with the help of Snoopy the super dog.

Oh snap, I didn't think Pauline would actually try to kidnap them with Bowser's help!

But that's okay, Mario got the cool Snoopy with him, so this will probably take them 5 minutes to save the day. :P

Ohh no Saphire and Autumn have been kidnapped, hopefully Mario can rescue them in time! Great story so far by the way!

Great chapter! It made me want to get some ice cream. I was kinda laughing when Pauline thought that Mario was Saphire's kid. I can't wait for the chapter when she looks like a total idiot when someone tells her she's not his kid LOL. I hope you update soon!

This story is getting really good! Awesome job, can't wait to for the next chapter

outstanding job on this chapter because i'm getting entertained