| Reviews for Breaking the Web |
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   NotEnoughTimeOnMyHands chapter 3 . 7/6/2014 Lovely! |
| Talldi chapter 3 . 6/24/2011 Very good story! |
| iheartGibbs chapter 3 . 1/29/2011 Just realized I never reviewed this. LOVED it! I wish this had been the way the new season had opened! 3 |
| boymommytotwo chapter 3 . 12/29/2010 ANOTHER WONDERFUL STORY! just wonderful! |
| MMWillow13 chapter 3 . 12/27/2010 Wonderful story! Love the Jackson/Abby/Gibbs interaction! |
| honeydust9251 chapter 3 . 11/29/2010 Good ending. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks again. |
| honeydust9251 chapter 2 . 11/29/2010 Really good. On to chap 3. Thanks. The only thing I would say is that you might want to rethink the 'needle at the end of the IV.' As a nurse and someone who has taught IV insertions and done countless starts myself, the needle is only used to help access the vein. Once in, the needle is removed. It would puncture the vein and leak IV fluid into the extremity if the IV was jostled, which can happen very easily. I'm assuming that you meant that the needle was still in her arm. Keep up the good writing though. |
| honeydust9251 chapter 1 . 11/29/2010 Good read. Suspensful and of course, about my 2 favorite characters. Needs a touch of proof reading-sorry to harp on that. But otherwise, very good. Keep up the good work. Yours are stories I don't hesitate to run a search for because I know they will be well written and something I want to stick with to the end. I know there are a lot of complaints about the show being American and people should write "American" (ex: your use of 'straight away') but if a story is good I don't let that bother me. Thanks for a good read. |
| Megok chapter 1 . 10/21/2010 I am a big fan of your stories! I have read all your story and looking forward find new story to come up every day! I like your way of showing how Gibbs and Abby loves each other:-) Please keep posting to give me ideas what happening in this seasons, since I don't get the latest episode in japan |
| IsleofSkye chapter 3 . 10/5/2010 I much prefer this version to what actually happened. It was believable and totally within character. I loved this, especially when Abby got all embarrassed about her morning breath. Great job! |
| transcan chapter 3 . 10/3/2010 This would have made a wonderful 2 hour season-ender after Rule 51, don't you think? Awesome writing - I'm looking forward to reading more from you! |
| fart fart chapter 3 . 10/2/2010 Great end to your story. |
| Amy'sDen chapter 3 . 10/2/2010 Great story and great ending. This just made my weekend! I hope you have another one in the works because your writing is so good. Thanks again for posting it. (I'll now sit and wait for an author alert from you!) |
| Sic Vita Est chapter 3 . 10/2/2010 Great ending to this story, just loved it! :) |
| bbfan chapter 3 . 10/2/2010 You are my hero! I LOVE your stories! |
