Ugh, this was wonderful. I love seeing these postwar fics where h/hr just get to have a normal life and a family. The earlier scenes with the younger kids were especially adorable

This is a truly lovely universe.

Beautiful. Loved it.

Thank you for sharing such a beautiful and moving story.

I know a pair that married step siblings and are very happy, The parents married only a year before they did. It happens. Good story by the way. I thought this fit well. I always thought in the end Ginny and Draco would be a good match.

your english definitely got room for improvement.

That was amazeballs
Rock on

Aw, great start. Don't think Harry and Hermione would name their kid after a death eater. I suppose it's possible that Avery wasn't a death eater in the "real" story, though.

I love this story. It was all great work, thank you.

The Avery/Devon scene reminded me of the movie 'Bewitched'. Especially the freak part. Oh well :)

Almost cried with the Ginny/Draco scene. :) Beautiful!

Hey sam! amazing story, i feel like little avery has a little part of me in her (sniffle sniffle, so touching and profound:) just wait and see, if i keep at this rate i will demolish this story today MWAH HA HA! i like your style of writing its really smooth and i catch alot of your own catchphrases and idiosyncrasies in it:)i would say keep up the good work but your already done so that would be a little more than just a little counterintuitive. i think you should play pheonix wright and make a fanfic of that PLEASE! (and if you don't write it Maya x pheonix i might have to disown you :D

I absolutely have fallen in love with this story. Avery and Page were a complete pleasure to read. I love how you developed the story and the personalities of the characters. Reading this I felt that it could have been a very real part of the Harry Potter Universe. I cried, laughed and gasped through the whole story. You made it all seem very real. I have to say fantastic job and I can't wait to read what else you have written for plan to write.

Peayitforward

I just finished this reading this story and I thought it was a very good story and I had enjoyed reading it great job writing it.

As i said before amazing story and something for you to be really proved off. I'm still not quite sure what i think of Avery and Devon but thats the strange ways my mind works.

In short big gratz and well done on a great series.