This is beautiful. That's all I have to say now.

This is so sad and yet so canon-fitting. Still, I wish Romeo and Juliet, Rachel and Jesse, had a happy ending. Great job with this. Beautiful and insightful one liners. The POV is just a little confusing. Sometimes I don't know who's thinking what. But otherwise, great job!

This was spectacular. Oh how I miss Jesse :(

I liked it. It shows a different essence of the St. Berry world, in here, most fics end happily, or with closure, this really shows how it was in the show, just throughout the eyes of both of them after the fact. It was pretty dang cool.