use google for spellings

Loved the chapter and really love the story I hope that you will update soon :)

I love the chapter and Mitoko, and a little tip for your issue on spelling, type the chapter in Microsoft Word or Note Pad and autocorrect the words. Food for thought :)

I LOVE MIKOTO

Please update I'm so sad it was sooo good and interesting because Naruto is like mentally 26 right ?

Great loving it a lot of spelling mistakes you should think about getting a beta

I know it's been years but do you think you'll come back to this and finish it

I just found this story and i love it, your doing great, hope you continue it.

Well!tell u what kid your actually doing pretty good...I like it and Im looking forward to read more of your fanfiction...I hope u will update the other cchapter soon...till then ja ne

Maby a short chapter but still good bashing is to be expected in fanfictions for story development or for the pure fuck of it. I think it was a great way to open up the possibility of Kurenai in the harem. As for Hinata maby make an OC that you think fits her. Hope you get a new chapter out soon. Ja Ne.

A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story

Please update

NOOO! It was so short why did have to stop dang it.. well anyway I love the story and I can't wait for you to update it :)

Why Did You STOP! I was loving this story! :( :( :(

will there be any more