Reviews for Chaos Element: Book One
Ronnie R15 chapter 6 . 6/27/2013
"We are so fucked." the understatement of this training session.
Henry V chapter 4 . 6/12/2011
Well, well, well.

Intruiging.

Your Universe Is slightly more detailed now, and you fill the gaps with some rather surprising differences. Except for a few typos, your writing stile has gotten better over time, even introduction of Scene breakers in the last chapters.

Well done, keep up the good work!

yours sincerely,

Henry V
Greed-kun chapter 2 . 12/28/2010
Cammander Ikari, always the psychopath. lol I like where it's going so far, and I'd like to see where it goes. I hope Ikari's prediction is right and the next Angel appears soon!