Reviews for Chaos Element: Book One |
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Ronnie R15 chapter 6 . 6/27/2013 "We are so fucked." the understatement of this training session. |
Henry V chapter 4 . 6/12/2011 Well, well, well. Intruiging. Your Universe Is slightly more detailed now, and you fill the gaps with some rather surprising differences. Except for a few typos, your writing stile has gotten better over time, even introduction of Scene breakers in the last chapters. Well done, keep up the good work! yours sincerely, Henry V |
Greed-kun chapter 2 . 12/28/2010 Cammander Ikari, always the psychopath. lol I like where it's going so far, and I'd like to see where it goes. I hope Ikari's prediction is right and the next Angel appears soon! |