DOCTOR! DON'T BREAK NEVERLAND!

Whoops... this has a very sad ending.

...oh god...I think that's my heart...

I think it's broken...

oh dear lord it is... :'(

excellently written though- now I think I need to sit down and watch some Peter Pan, yeah.

-DMRA

Aww... Now I feel depressed!

Doctor, now what have we said about messing with Peter Pan.

This made me so sad! But great idea!

It's worth repeating-Second star to the right is from the Disney version, as opposed to Second to the right which is what Barrie says it is.

My goodness, that was much sadder than I had anticipated! Oh, Donna, haven't you heard the stories? Didn't it ring any bells when he said "It looked like a star, the second one to the right"? Oh, poor Peter. And what about Tink? Can she even survive in this world? She'll just live inside a theater, where there's lots of clapping each night T.T
But great job *sobs*

What?! That's so sad! NO! Poor Peter! A well written fic, however :)

Really clever idea for a story. Love PP and DW!

I LOVE IT!

To answer the last one, the word added by Disney was star.

In the book Peter Pan, the directions given by Peter are Second to the right. The word second was added by Disney, and is taken literally as two stars in the sky. In the book Peter just made it up.

That is too sad. Wow. I'm in shock. He's on the wrong side.

Excellent