This was definitely a different take on the whole time travel thing but there are a few inconsistencies! I mean if this was a very AU then probably it doesn’t matter...if not for one the locket was not in place until 1979 so finding it before that would be a problem. That’s one major thing that doesn’t add up. Another one you did sort of answer in the end about why she stayed only for a short time. What did she achieve with her title and vaults? That was not touched upon. Apart from that her popping up in a third timeline and having a normal life seems fine given the alterations she did. There are a few continuity errors too but not great ones in the greater scheme of events.

The idea was definitely unique and the way in which the story was presented was good too but if you ever get the time to revisit this you may want to make those changes to fix it up and make the story even great. Just a suggestion.

This was perfect! This story really doesn’t have enough appreciation!

why is this so freacking good ohmygod

Wow! Great story :)

I find it rather insulting. Boys, ... That's the same as Women. If some people/character says it people react rather negatively, but with Boys/Men no one even mentions/notices it. It's really aggravating.

This is amazing

Fabulous characters and really involving story, thank you!

i really like this story...its short and fast but sweet and leaves you feeling happy

Brilliant! :)

Loved it!

This was perfect. Thank you so much.

great chapter thank you. I've never read a story with this type of background. looking forward to reading more

this story will never get old. I keep reading it over and again, loving the time travel jumps. great story

That's was... Mind blowing!
It was a well thought out plot. Well developed storyline. Very interesting twists and turns.

I mean, constructive feedback, there were a few continuity issues and a few moments of, well that wasn't really necessary.

this is such a truly excellent fic, and I really enjoyed it. Your storytelling is incredible.