Nicely told.

Pfft, niiiiice going , Arthur... xD That was cute and I loved it!

Haha! I loved for a good five minutes Merlin's slow clapping at the end! Great job!

Oh, i loved it.

nice one!

Omg, I love it.

Cute and very funny. That's how to definate your story. Very amazing :) thanks for this

D i could so see this happening. very fuuny, i loved it ]

I loved this! It felt like a alternative scene that actually could have happened on the show. Everything was very well done, but I think you wrote Arthur in particular incredibly in character.

haha omg this is ther best i totally wish this was in the episode, i really love merlin at the end i could totally picture it happeneing good job:)

That was hilarious! Nice take on the ending here. And Merlin clapping at the end seriously cracked me up. Thanks for the great read! :)

Kar, xx

lol Funny, well written oneshot! I still haven't been able to watch this episode, so I didn't really get what was going on as I read. Still, I enjoyed reading your work. :) I just cracked up when Merlin started "clapping." Poor Arthur...

Well done!

HAHA. HIs Gwen. Jealousy is sooooo cute on some ppl, Arty being one of them. THat was great!

I liked Merlin clapping. Very slowly. I can just see his face... So in character.

LOL LOL LOL, Bravo, Bravo:)

I love the fact that Arthur gets there, and then he has no idea what to say... it's something that's happened to everyone at least once, isn't it? I loved this episode, and I preffered what they did in the actual episode, with him just watching from the battlements, but this was a very funny twist on it. Part of me wishes this had happened...

And I love the part where Merlin begins to clap. haha.

Well done :)