Suitable for a movie :)

oh now it starting to get good

OMG! Jack and Rose from the Titanic!

realy good story so awesome cant wait to read the second

Experiencing a period of writers block, are we?

Awesome story. This is a good one. Mike out.

Good story, will read the next one.

Not a Holy! story. But... Warm I guess. Leading up to something to read in the future I hope. I like warm stories but there has to be something around the corner. I don't like surprises in real life but in stories I am eager for them.

Not to be review killer but wouldn't Lilly what a train is if she knew what roadkill is? Other than that I'm still reading.

Is this gonna have sexual themes since it with animals

Nice job

I like this story how do you write story's?

I herd that your trying to make a wolf advntures 2 i have ieads. am only ten but a strong imagin. kate could have four pups named brain bella cody and Midnight. Brain and midnight are the alphas cody and bella are the omegas. they get capchared and took to spring falls in Idow. there are to many rancher to go aroun them with out getting shot so kate and humphrey. afto get them. they afto get past the ranchers a rivle pack excape cougers and jump on the train. ill give you more ideas later still wrighting it. you are alloued to copy

Great story. Please write more stories for Alpha and Omeaga, you are awesome!

Awesome story, you should make a sequel.