That was #Adorbs

Really good story.

I like your writing style and can't wait to read more

Awe

Aaaaawwww *sniff*, the feels man, you gave me the feels.

And lee kept looking all night...

that was beauuuuuutiful. plus i reckon there should be more: naruten and narushizu pairings:-D!

That was sooo sweet!

Wish someone would actually draw fanart of this pairing, from diffrent one-shots. This story has a great ending. :3

Awwwwwwww! Henge *glomps author* _ your the best :D

The constant switching back and forth between viewpoints was a little rocky, but I liked the fic. Normally I'm a pretty die-hard NaruHina fan, but I've liked NaruTen as well. I think with a bit more work on the transitions from one character to another this one could really shine.

One of the things that I particularly appreciated was the dedication to making a believable connection between the two. I've read far too many fics where they (insert guy/girl, or guy/guy or girl/girl combo of your choice here) suddenly see each other in a new light for no apparent reason and then everything's WONDERFUL! I might like Waff, but K-rated PWP just irks me.

A nice little oneshot, I like it when a pairing is rationalized because of the couples similarities and chemistry rather than just 'omg that person is so hawt im in luv' or 'they look so kewt together 3'.

I also just like it when Tenten is developed in general. I've always thought that she was the most realistic ninja in Naruto, and I think she has a lot of potential that never seems to get tapped.

Perfect aim? Not a lot of chakra? Willing to dress as neccessary and not to look good? Hello assassin.

One on one fight? She's a ninja, she should be killing them unaware from long range or gutting them like a fish up close with her weapon mastery. Maybe even poisoning them like a true killer.

Against an large amount of people? She can manipulate a crapload of weapons at once, and even ignoring that if every kunaoi she throws hits a vital spot she could mow down the enemy with rediculous speed. She really doesn't even need to use chakra much except to use kawarmi to dodge death, or maybe shunshin to escape to a distance to continue a ranged assault.

She could be a real badass, she just rarely gets developed enough, so thanks for giveing her some limelight.

This would have been perfect if you gave a better ending line. I mean come on, "I hope you know what your getting yourself into". Lame as hell, you should have ended it with her question, then Naruto walking up to her and either hugging her or kissing her. Or a better line than the one you got. Heck, you could have had the ending line be "You wanna fight a guy wearing a skirt?" That would have been priceless.

Other than that, really good one shot.

this needs a sequel

Great story.