Reviews for APH RoChu: A Day Without China
Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2014
It's pronounced wow I nee...(wo ai ni)
Lost Friend chapter 2 . 10/17/2011
Ah Ivan don't cry, its going to be okay. (I hope)
buguize chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
Poor Ivan ,Yao will come back to your side.
Oki-aru chapter 2 . 3/26/2011
this is cute!
whoevenISthis chapter 2 . 3/13/2011
D'awww so sad. I liked it.
Waruitenshi chapter 2 . 2/26/2011
... Wait... WHAT SNAPPED? Lmfao ohh come on! Please update! I must know! I have many speculations but no answers! Niyaaaaaah! I feel bad for Russia. I've got his attitude when it comes to being all possessive over someone yah love XD. I FEEL FOR YOU RUSSIA! HANG IN THERE!
rhieny chapter 2 . 2/12/2011
update soon _
haraguro-tan chapter 2 . 1/22/2011
Aww poor Ivan ;_; Their separation during that period is always very sad. It's really nice of Ukraine to comfort him. Next chapter da?

Just some constructive crit. I feel that there's an excessive use of italics in both chapters. I think italics are only relevant for inner thoughts. For flashbacks, it's best to state somewhere that it's a flashback or the most common method is to use the asterisk separator ( doesn't allow multiple asterisks in a line so I use a line separator instead). Otherwise, it gets confusing. Also, some layout issues. I'd put a space between each separate line. If you want the lines to be in the same paragraph, then there should be no line breaks at all.

If you ever want a beta reader, I'll be glad to help when I have time. Just drop me a message! :D
haraguro-tan chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
Yao with cat ears is always so adorable XD I love how they're arguing about how to describe Yao at the end XD
Guest chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
Our Yao(I’m Chinese aru) is always cute. Just wear the cat ears Yao-chan, and Kiku I know you like Nii with cat ears, moe!