Not bad, could be lengthier and use more details

Nice a bit ooc but nice

Wow, I didn't realize you were such a good writer! I like this story, even though I don't totally understand it, so yeah, I'm guessing that's good. It's not the kind of story that would never come from me (and you know that) but either way, I still like it! And, yes, I realize that I said I liked it about 17 times, but I thought I wouldn't because of the description. (Again, because you know me!) Great job! :)

Wow I really loved this! I didn't even know this character Katrina and I was crying over her death! I loved how you connected their rockstar dreams with his joining the glee club... Amazing story told by an amazing writer! ,)