| Reviews for Etna's Meal |
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   DARKDEATH98 chapter 1 . 6/15/2017 Not bad, all four chapters work, I suppose. I prefer the pairing or Adell and Rozalin though. Whatev, at least the two have some time together in the second chapter. I suppose I can keep this story in my favs if I ignore chapter 4, that scenario seems way too impossible to me. Teaching Hanako about identity theft was hilarious. I wonder if her appetite came back and Hanako was the only one around at the time. My mind is racing now... |
| Reishin Amara chapter 4 . 1/21/2013 hell yes! more please! |
| ToroGuns150 chapter 4 . 1/5/2013 Keep going with these! they are really good x) Make one with Flonne and Etna :D |
| Dontforgetme chapter 1 . 7/30/2012 This is my review for the whole ordeal. While i liked the plot, it was a little suprising. that some of etnaxadells.. transgressions went unnoticed. in fact, how did anything etna did go unnoticed? xD I am very proud that you managed to have this much plot, with... this much... lets call it 'detail'. speaking of detail, i liked how much you put in. though, this did change my mind about adell... and rozalin... not etna though. moving right along, the legnth was good, i prefer long fictions, and... thats my review. (nice plot twist at the end there ;D) |
| AbsoluteVictoryUnlosingRanger chapter 1 . 2/27/2011 Pwaaa... pwaaa.. pweweeee... Awesome. That... this is jut awesome! I wasn't even looking for this kind of story, I almost wasn't even going to keep reading, but man, was I shocked! Surprisingly well written bravo! |
| Molenar CS chapter 1 . 1/6/2011 i like the concept here, with etna's character it makes sense for this kind of situation. well written, this is the first of your works i have read but i will definately be looking for more of them. |
| ssg98 chapter 1 . 12/23/2010 moar would like to read moar |
| End of a Thought chapter 1 . 10/29/2010 Hey, that was pretty good! Your writings fine and the lemon was very...vivid. Needs some more chapters though. |
| FanofFemdom14 chapter 1 . 10/11/2010 ...I've got to be honest here. The story itself... i see what you're trying to point out. however is there any background to it? Cause from what i can tell the story is just: Etna is in bed and rapes Adell. That's it, no reasoning, nor explanation is given. As for the sex scene... Make it a bit more graphic, it seems slightly rushed. This is criticism i understand, but out of a scale of 10...this'd get a 7...6.75 at the most |
