Very cute, of all of your fic's this one could easily be turned into a much longer story.

Well Done, short, sweet and brutal with lots of possabilitys.

Thanks foe a Great Read,

Peanut Gallery

I really enjoyed your story, but I have to agree with the other posters, you have a lot more to tell.

You're a good writer

This is promising. I hope you plan on continuing this story.
But, if you end up dropping it I would like to finish it myself. With your permission, of course.

You had me hooked. I was searching for more story but realized there was none. It's an excellent attention grabbing start.

I liked that. It had a very probable plot.

More please! Much more

Okay, you have my attention, for now. Please continue.

Very fun and short and Cameron being normal kills people.

Good Story. There just one problem. Just when it started

getting good you stopped. Like getting only one bite of a pie.